Great Job so far on The Slayer War Zone Series. I llike how eac character is started into their own storyline that will allow the stories to develope and still stay interconnected.
I came across the Slayer comic a few years ago. I think when I came across Exotics Illusions and was checking out the artwork there when I caught some of the story. It is the only adult comic I found that I liked. I am sorry to see the orginal Series end, but I can also understand your desision on that, and am not disappointed at all of the War Zone Series.
I think I may take a short break from War Zone on the next update as it seems like an appropriate time to step away, if you have any strong views on what you would like to see as your next update let me know.
I am not sure what you are asking here. Mainly because I have no idea how far ahead you have planned the storyline. Nor do I know where you would like the ideas presented.
Here are some of my thoughts I'd like to see in the updates to make the story interesting.
CORDILLA: After watching Buffy and Dawns reactions on the screen and seeing the pleasure they displayed. She is angered by their reactions towards her decission. Out of resentment towards them she excepts her role. She willing stirs her master to show him her obedience and works for his approval. Some intrique should begin to exist between the pets as they spar to be the master's favorite. As well as developing CLOSE allegiances as well.( Of the three I feel that this one is the most important as Cordilla at this point can be used to effect the other two tales and either major or minor roles. Her story can also lead good or bad into the War Zone Series as she is now only interested in her own salvation ( and might I add involved in Resistance Intel, which can go either way) I would be interested in seeing her develope as a major character in this series.
BUFFY: (Poor Buffy) "Beaten, but not broken" Yet! Higher numbers continues as she struggles out of pride not to submit as the betting on her continues. Even as she is phyiscally exhausted and defeated she holds her own before collapsing before the masters step in to interupt. She is taking to a lab to be treated and examined and the identity of a father is established. To be announced as a big TO DO show as it would be like the winner being annouced for a major lottey.
( This story is minor to the other two at the moment in my opinion.)
Dawn: Winning the first round she is allowed a day to recuperate. She is afterall the star Gladiator so should be treated as one to up the ratings. Of course her Arena trainer and Keeper takes advantage of the nana chip to help her relax some ater Dawn berates her for it having been used during the first match.( Maybe the developement towards a relationship) Dawn is presented with offers of high value and previleges from some high ranking officers to be their personal pet. Which she diclines (as advised by her trainer as well because it is too early) she prepares for her next match. Which should be more difficult for her.
Well there is some strong views. I hope that was what you were asking for. I can write it up in in more detail if you like and/or are interested. As I said before I have no idea of how far you planned out the series or its existing storyline
I do have a question though.
What is the incubation period of a Demon spawn pregnancy?
I always thought of instantly as a bit much. Maybe at least 4 weeks would be good and quick enough. Maybe a liitle longer if necessary to explain character feelings and adjustments to the condition. That just depends on how far you want to go with the story I guess. Too quick is just to many Demons running about at one time. Just my thought on the matter.
by Gonzo on Fri Feb 26, 2010 10:01 pm 
Anyway the good news is this will be a double update to make up for lost time, so expect 30+ pages of Slayer Mayhem as Dawn is heading to the ARENA... 
